and then the rest. it jumps from 11 to 13 i think, which is even more confusing. sorry.

The only two things I forgot to add were: (13) there's an extra space between the reference and the annotation. These need to be in (14) APA, too. Look at this example. 

Crap. (15) NO QUOTES. If you look at the example, and this resonates with our project, there is not a single quote. Likewise, there ought to be no quotes.